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Nightwise N Jolene by ~Charger426:iconCharger426:


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Submitted: March 16, 2008
File Size: 287 KB
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Resolution: 600×770
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These are shadowcat9279 :iconshadowcat9279: Original Characters Nightwise (he's the car, a Transformer) and Jolene (the girl on the hood).
This was done kinda quick like, so its a little rough. I'm practicing drawing women since I don't do it well and never will if I don't start.
Feel free to critique, I need all the help I can get. :)
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Her neck looks a little long, to be honest. And I think the folds in her tank top are unflattering. Hair looks good and I love the background. Damn, make me wanna go to mexico...
I think this is where Convoy and I disagree. Considering how her hair lays, her neck is fine--and I actually prefer that her clothes look realistic, rather than perfect. I think you did a pretty good job on the girl .

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Armed with the personality of Leprecaun gold on a winter's day...
:hug: Oh this is great! I love it, thank you so much!

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"Why does everyone think Ill mess up just because I like to drive fast?" - Hotshot, Transformers: Cybertron
Thanks! But I'm going to try to do better. This is just practice. :)

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*nods* Still I like the way it looks

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"Why does everyone think Ill mess up just because I like to drive fast?" - Hotshot, Transformers: Cybertron

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